a hobo's art stuff

[a hobo001]

Some of these are not that special but can i get some constructive criticism so that i may get better
thanx
2 new sigs
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/Sig-1.jpg
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/sig.png

Fable 2 pic
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/fable.jpg

Master chief pic
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/bg.jpg

Mercenaries 2 wallpaper
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/Mercwallpaper.jpg

Splinter cell collage wallpaper
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/splinter_cell_001copycopy.jpg

Prince of persia wallpaper
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/jokes_alot3/cool-popcopy.jpg

[xInfamous2x]

yeah to be honest your pictures seem cluttered. you should blur the edges of some of those renders and "magic wand" them with a higher tolerance..

if that statement didnt make me sound like a tool this one will.

i xcited 4 fable 2, and i's wants it badry.

[a hobo001]

lol thanx for the tip
an yea i cant wait either

[PsychoBucket]

Im not sure if it's my computer, but a lot of them seem dark.

[purplerawrs69]

dude there good but u need to blend more things are just like piled on top of each other add some **** change up the opacity

[WoozyJoJo]

Fable 2 pic:
Use the pen tool or the polygonal lasso if you want a cleaner cut without the white marks. Also, personally, the background would probably be better with a motion blue or heavy Gaussian blur.

Master chief pic:
Looks pretty cool, but the red looks out of place because of the black surrounding it. To fix it, you should cut close to the red and then blur the red's edges, or just try to recreate the red-thing on a new layer.

Mercenaries 2 wallpaper:
Kind of busy but pretty cool, the lady seems really out of place though, being half-visible and a weird head, just my opinion. Also, a few things seem awkwardly cut/placed. For example, the character in front with the rocket should be in the very front, while the guy off to the left should be behind him.

Splinter cell collage wallpaper:
Very good. Only problems are again, it's kind of busy, and the left side of his head has some white edges (fix w/ pen/lasso) Also, I didn't understand why there was a patch of wall(?) to the mid-right.

Prince of persia wallpaper:
Very good again, but, it would look better if the edges of the head weren't blurry. Also, I don't understand what's in the bottom right (the brownish smudge..)?

And why does it say "Wallpapers.com hosted by JTLnet.com? Clarify please?
Cleared up in a pm.


Anyways, good luck with future work, you're doing alright so far.

[a hobo001]

posted 2 new sigs very first 2 now

[PsychoBucket]

The top one seems dark again. If it is supposed to say something on the left side, I can't read it. Again it is probably my computer.

[a hobo001]

it says will kill for food

[PsychoBucket]

it says will kill for food
Definitally can't see that. I can see the 4 and then at the bottom it looks like Fred. The top I can only see the W and the rest is unreadable.

[a hobo001]

Definitally can't see that. I can see the 4 and then at the bottom it looks like Fred. The top I can only see the W and the rest is unreadable.

ok then sry bout that

[PsychoBucket]

When you look at it in the forum can you read it?

[a hobo001]

yes i can <-too short to submit lol

[PsychoBucket]

Then just forget everything I said. I think I have a wierd screen resolution that is making your picture look smaller then it actually is.

[a hobo001]

ok lol then wat do u think of the second sig

[PsychoBucket]

I like that one! :thumbup:

[a hobo001]

thats good lol

[Ganye]

The first one the render looks a bit too blurry on the left. And the rendering on the third and fourth one is horrible, no offense: There's a pixel or two of white around the edges, and it takes away from the rest of the photo.

[a hobo001]

i knew a few werent very good but do u like the others

[Ganye]

The wallpapers just look like a bunch of random pictures, to be honest.

[xInfamous2x]

seriously.. hobo. look back at what Woozy said about your picture with a url in it..

im really curius to why that is.

[a hobo001]

k jus to let u kno infamous thats where i got the first pic an missed that while i was erasing an smudging k :)