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xSharpshooter94
07-04-2009, 11:44 PM
Manhood

How do you measure a man.
By the cloths he wears?
By the people he knows?
Or how much he cares?

Do you measure by how fast he runs?
How high he jumps?
By how smart he is,
Or how many bruises and bumps?

In the grand scheme of things, none of those matter.
Just trivial fact.
Whether he be successful
Or trying to get his life in-tact.

All that matters is if he lives his life.
Whether he be a man or a boy.
Does he have regrets?
Can he find the joy?

eguitarplaya33
07-05-2009, 12:00 AM
OOO! Free Verse, I like it. I like the meaning behind the peom. I hate poems without meaning, you can easily find the meaning in this peom, well of course its the first sentence. Nice job andrew

Coyote1023
07-05-2009, 07:33 AM
No. It is lines 2:4 rhyme...

xSharpshooter94
07-30-2009, 12:58 AM
just something i felt like writing